Question by eimmik93: Is this a good thesis? If not, what can I do to fix it?
“All teenagers with low self-esteem should have to attend counseling?” I want my thesis to be universal, meaningful and arguable-please give me tips so I can make it into a good thesis!!!
Well i have to create an essay comparing a novel to a short story. The novel i was given does discuss teen pregnancy, but the short story does not. Low self-esteem and depression are pretty much the only similarities in both stories.

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Answer by Ryan M
It would be stronger if you said, “All teenagers with low self-esteem should have to attend counseling because they could harm others, eat rabbits, or chew bad gum.” Not saying use those examples obviously, but a good thesis normally will tell WHY you think that. And then you would use one paragraph explaining each reason (unless your paper is longer then u use like a page or something). I hope this helped.

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