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How Should I Conclude My Research Paper on Psych?

Question by RoXie: How should i conclude my research paper on Psych?
This is what i have so far but i dont necessarily like it

Psychology or counseling , is a field with great honors. These honors mostly go unnoticed but it is the little things that count such as being there to listen. Psychology, the study of the mind and behavior, is still a field that I am highly interested in. After researching psychology I have decided I still want to pursue the field. Psychology is a occupation that can make a difference. It is not only the study of the mind and behavior, but it helps cultivate the maturing process in one’s life.

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Answer by craziibuti_ful
You repeat “psychology” too many times. I think you should not say “psychology OR counseling”….does not sound right. JUst say psychology, if that’s what you wrote about because a degree in psychology does not neccesarily mean you will be counseling.
You also repeated “the study of the mind and behavior” …one must go!!

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