Question by Sparkywonderplus: is this good?? for a story?
its long and complicated …. well … I guess.
okay im 13 years old, im at my grandparents house for 4 weeks. should i write about this in my spare time?
heck i got enough spare time to write 6 books 😛
So yehhh… Im bored and this’ll gimme something to do, you think this is an interesting storyline and is it worth atleast a week of worries?

A group of kids (well actually every child human in the universe) go to their God’s tombstone, they ask and pray for his assistance because there is an interstellar war going on between their race and another. (only the kids ask because all their parents are all fighting in the war … dying)And so the god answers their calls, and his solution for this mighty problem is to destroy the almost all of the human race. With his faithful Demon “pet” The Great God slaughters all of the kids which called him, and leaves the humans fighting the war to the other race’s mercy. Only a select few adult humans survive the war, they go into hiding and slowly repopulate a planet called Earth.

Among all of those slaughtered kids, only one of them does the Deity spare. That one he turns into a Demon-human crossbreed, and hands the child to it’s Only surviving relative, it’s aunt.

This child, later in life (once The earth has been inhabited by almost 33 hundred humans, and the child is 11), descovers that she is a human-demon crossbreed and tries to hide that fact from her fellow humans.

She unwillingly and unknowingly turns into a demon, as a Demon she lacks control over herself and goes on a rampage and destroys half of England (including her family), wakes up from her rampage and finds that she is now in The U.S state california.

She goes to the local orphanage, gets adopted and ends up as an old man’s adopted daughter, in which she treats as if he were her blood father. Now 17, she has a calm and happy life, almost forgetting she’s part Demon.

Until some Government group, called the 51, tracks her down and captures her.

They interrogate her, but before she could spill her secrets that she is a Human-Demon crossbreed, her demon side bubbles back to the surface and she ends up slaughtering and destroying the government base and the whole state of Nevada with it.

She finds herself in new york. Not bothering to go to the local orphanage fearing another incident, she sits by the curb grieving for all her losses and acts as a poor beggar, After years of begging and scavaging for scraps of food, the Deity (desguised as a civillian of course) which had once spared her life, takes her into his care, eventually strips the human side of her away and turns her into a pure Demon, replacing the old Demon Lillith which died not too long ago.

For thousands of years our demon-human sits alongside the Deity in his acts of terror all somehow still bent on saving the human race, she slaughters for him, sends diseases for him, creates wars for him. but soon The Deity calls for a worldwide slaughter much like the beginning of the story to take place.

All Under the reasoning that the human race is becoming more and more over populated and will eventually ruin the planet of it’s rescources, over populate the earth, consume their whole solar system with pollution and end up perminantely exterminated.

But the Demon girl – once being human – cannot do this. The Deity sends her away to exile reluctantly but cannot have “disloyalty”. Before they cut off her head and burn her to ashes, she begs the Deity for another chance, she is forgiven. Out of utter rage and everlasting loyalty to her birth race, she kills the God. Eventually the human race does Ruin the planet of rescources and begins to pollute the while solar system which starts a war between the human race and the remaining beings of the solar system, the Plutonians, the inhabitants of pluto. Pluto sends Bio-nuclear weapons to earth and neutrilizes the last of the human race.

The Demon girl gets sent into exile, The deity resurrected and the human race born once again, after millions of years.

please. you dont have to read it all. i guess you could skim through and still understand ….

P.S im only 13, dont bee harsh ….
I already wrote about this 🙂 but i split it into paragraphs so it’d be easier to read, and i finished the end.

and any pointers (changes, ideas, added things etc etc ) would be happily taken.
i have not founded a name for the demon-human, any suggesttions (like a demonish name) would be helpful…

Best answer:

Answer by Cap’n Blueballs
Yes, it was long and complicated, but a great idea nevertheless (always wanted to use that word).

Roll with it. Good luck.

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